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Glace noire et bulles blanches

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Pierre Rodriguez - French Professional Photographer

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Image size
567x850px 579.4 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/4 second
Aperture
F/18.0
Focal Length
17 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 25, 2011, 8:25:29 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

So, here is my first critique on DA...

The overall composition using wide-angle is well done and is delivering the expected immersion feeling. The bottom third of the image is particularly graphic and intriguing ; it catches the eye immediately. I am a little disappointed by the small size of the mountains in the background, of course induced by the short focal length. Some perspective corrections during perspective could help.
Toning and exposure are well controlled. We are of course on the blue end of the spectrum, but correcting it too much would not reflect the real lighting of those winter days in the mountains.
I would personally have withdrawn the 2 poles in the background that are disturbing the natural content of the photo.

Overall an attractive and pleasing image, with a very nice graphic and tones content.